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雅思G类书信写作范文 举办活动的祝贺信

本期雅思G类书信写作老烤鸭小编要介绍的是与参加活动相关。我们在国外生活,经常会参加一些公益组织或者公司乃至政府举办的活动,有的活动是免费的,有的会收取一定的入场费用,但是不管如何,假如你决定活动办得非常好的话,可以写一封信给活动的组织者向他们表示祝贺或者感谢。

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 请花二十分钟完成此项任务

An annual event was recently held in your area. Now you want to write to the organizers of this event congratulating them on a successful production. 在你住的地区举办了一场年度活动。现在你想写一封信给这场活动的组织者们,对此次活动的成功举办,向他们表示祝贺。

Write a letter to the organizers. In your letter, give -写一封信给活动组织者,在你的信件中:

  • the details of the event 给出活动的细节情况
  • what you most liked about the event 你尤其喜欢活动的哪个方面
  • a polite criticism of something you thought could be improved 针对活动的提高给出一个善意的批评

You should write at least 150 words. 不低于一百五十个词

参考范文(建议对着题目要求先写自己练习一遍,然后再参考范文学习):

Dear Sir or Madam,

尊敬的先生/女士,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Joe Conor, a local resident of Essex, writing to congratulate you for arranging a successful community meet-up programme this year. Many other residents whom I have talked to lately, feel the same. Your organisation deserves applause from all of us.

我是Joe Conor, 一位住在Essex的本地居民。我写此信是为了向你们表达祝贺,祝贺你们成功举办了今年的社区见面会项目。很多和我最近聊过的的居民们都和我的感觉一样。你们的组织理所应当收到我们的大家的掌声。

Tenth March is a special day for the citizens of Essex. This day witnesses the largest gathering of local residents and the vote to elect some key members of the community makes it even more significant. This article is from Laokaoya website. Arranging the morning meeting, administering the successful voting, serving lunch to everyone and then finally letting members talk about their complains and compliments require an exceptional team of people and their hard work. You made this programme memorable and meaningful.

三月十日对Essex的市民们来说是一个特别的日子。人们见证了当天居民最大的集会,加上要选一些校区的核心代表成员出来就更显得这个日子的重要性了。安排早上的会议,确保投票的顺利进行,为大家提供午餐以及最后让成员发表他们自己的抱怨和称赞,这些考验着一个团队以及他们的努力程度。是你们让这个项目变得值得留恋且有意义。

I was quite amazed by the introduction of a software-based voting system that was instantaneous and flawless. Unlike the previous years, we did not have to wait for hours to learn the result. This was a great addition to the programme.

我被一个计算机投票系统惊到了,速度快而且没出纰漏。不像前些年,我们现在不需要等好几个小时才能看到结果。这对整个项目来说帮了大忙。

Having said that, I would recommend some amusement facilities for children and volunteers to look after them so that parents can participate in the programme without looking over their shoulder.

虽然如此及,我建议为儿童弄一些娱乐设施,然后志愿者来照顾好他们好让他们的父母不用时不时回头看看自己的孩子们。

Thank you once again for a remarkable programme this year. We will remember this for many days to come.

再次感谢今年这个相当棒的项目。我们日后一定还会记得这一天的。

Yours faithfully,

Joe Conor

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