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雅思G类小作文范文 雅思书信写作 给商店经理写信

本期雅思G类书信写作老烤鸭小编要介绍的话题与购物相关。在国外的商店购买了某件产品发现了质量问题,通常是在第一时间去店里说明情况,不过对于离家很远的商店,驱车去商店走一趟也不太方便,因此邮件沟通说明情况会比较有效率。

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.请花二十分钟完成此项任务

You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.你最近为你家的厨房添置了一个新的设备,但是运行不了。你给店家打了电话,但是店铺那边没回应。

Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter:写一封信给商店经理,在信件中,

  • describe the problem with the equipment 描述一下设备的问题
  • explain what happened when you phoned the shop 解释一下你给商店打电话时发生了啥
  • say what you would like the manager to do 说明你想让经理采取什么样的措施

Write at least 150 words.

参考范文(建议对着题目要求先写自己练习一遍,然后再参考范文学习):

Dear Sir or Madam,

亲爱的先生、女生,

I am writing to express my utter disappointment regarding the food factory device that I purchased from your shop a few days ago. I was very excited to purchase this kitchen appliance but disappointed to find that it was poorly made and has a manufacturing flaw.

几天前我在贵商店购买了一件’食物工厂‘设备,写此信是想表达我对此设备的强烈不满。我本来对购买这个厨房设备的事情是非常兴奋的,但是这设备做工很差,而且有生产缺陷,我很失望。

I visited your shop on 4th November and purchased a brand new Philips food factory that comes with two years warranty. However, to my sheer astonishment, when I unwrapped the box and tried to run the device, it did not work. I thoroughly checked all the connections as the problem could have been on my end but this was not the case. This translation is from Laokaoya website. Immediately, I called the shop and complained about the faulty product. I also provided all the details the person on the other side of the phone requested. He assured me that a company representative will be visiting me in a couple of days and replace the product. But this has never proved to be true. The order number is 8541203 and I am attaching a copy of my receipt.

我在十月四日的时候去了你们的商店,购买了一个全新的有两年质保的飞利浦食物工厂。然而,让我很好吃惊的是,当我打开包装盒的并尝试启动这台设备的时候,它并没运转。我全面检查了一下电源接触问题,因为可能是我这边出了什么问题,但是并不起作用。我立即给店里打了电话抱怨了这个出问题的产品。我也出具了电话那边工作人员要求的具体细节。他向我保证说公司的代表会在几天后来找我并置换掉这个产品。但是,情况并非如此。这个订单号是8541203,我也把我的收据副本附上了。

I urge you to immediately address the issue and replace the faulty product with a new and fresh one.

我敦促你们你们能够尽快处理这个问题,并把这个出问题的产品换一个全新的。

Yours faithfully,

致敬

Joe Smith

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